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Friday, October 21, 2016

A CAKING GOOD TIME!

This is my recount I have been working on. I hope to get ideas on what  to write and what I can work on.

We learn how to  Try and use figurative language such as similes,hyperbole,puns or Metaphors.  



My next step is to work on short Punchy sentences.And to understand what what Whaea Lana was talking about with puns.



HOPE YOU LIKE IT!


                                                             A caking good time

There I was sleeping peacefully dreaming like I was on a soft cloud and nothing can stop me  and as free as a  unicorn on a Rainbow running wild.All of sudden that ended. Nan knocked on the door”BANG,BANG,BANG!!!” I went to open the door and Nan said”Why aren’t you ready?”  I said “Where are we going and Why do I have to get changed?”  We're going to Nana Keres’ birthday, ”Okay,but don’t do that again.We went shouting off like a jetpack .But  it wasn’t our car it was This lady from Felina and her mokos came to True and Heremaia.We were going to Otaua marea.

We arrived at Otaua  marae and everybody was there,singing,dancing and they're learning the haka for Nana Kere . Everybody was looking  at us and then we finally got powhiri in and nobody hariu us but  Nana Kere.  After that we had a waiata and we sang He honore.  We had a kai after that, we had Mince and Potatoes and for our pudding was Ice cream and fruit salad.  We went chasing True because  he was getting cheeky because he wanted to have a run but he wanted some to be with he,me Rangimarie and Laviniah was chasing him.After that  we played hiding go seek  and then we had to leave.We all moaned”But then all the fun will be over.

The next day was a beautiful day.  Yesterday was just the powhiri, but  today is the real day that we go down and have the birthday party! I was Excited and happy that we were going down but True and Heremai didn’t come they had to stay home with their mum, nana and dad said. So  my nana went to go pick one of my sisters to take to the birthday instead of Laviniah and  felena .She went to pick up my sister ngarima,she is named after my Nana Goose.  We went down and we were late because nana had just come back from work and we left 5 minutes after she got back,so she can have a shower and have a kai so we can leave.

I felt Sad,I heard crying because we had to leave,I saw happiness and I thought that  it was sad that we had to leave .I also felt happy that I went to the birthday .What do you think,that you have to leave your cousins and you don’t have to see them until the next year.?How will you well?
   



Friday, October 14, 2016

Do you know hows to do assonance?

We Learn how to do Assonance poem and how to use the correct homophones like  Their,They're and
There.Assonance's is when you got a value sound that keeps sounding the same like my mind is a Ocean my words are a river and it is as smooth as jazz.



Next time,In my poem I'm going to work on alliteration