Under the Mountain

We have been learning how to re-write the story Under the mountains.

Under the Mountain

In this book the main People are The twins,Rick,the father and the mother

One day they were playing on the farm were  father where he had worked and the Twins  wondered off and got lost the same day the father was calling out to them with no response.The father was looking for them,so he went back to the house and Told the mother to ring the Cops.100 people ,dog and Cop were on the lookout.This lady had seen them out the window in the forest and said that their was going to be a snowstorm .She told a old man that the twins was missing so   He had went to go and look for them and He had found them in a fern bush and said ‘You’s are the Chosen ones and we are family,one day I will come back for you”.One night a policeman had crashed by the Lake and yelled  their names, they  could not hear him because they  sound asleep,warm and Cozy.The dog had sensed something and the policeman had thought he had  sensed a pig but he had  found the twins.The Lady had picked up the phone and had told the man that they had found the twins.

Under the Mountain 2.

The next day the twins had woken up and the man said. “Come on get your bags ready.”

He lifted up the suitcase and said. “Come on I’ll take your's back to your home, come on hurry jump in the truck.”

Theo  and Rachel jumped into the truck and went to the road.The truck big huge tyers and flames on the side,They went on to the other side of the lake and seen their house and jumped out and ran inside and their mum was at the door waiting for them. When they walked into the door the mother hugged them very hard. After the mother had hugged them, she told Rick to take their bags up to the bedroom.

They went to go play and it was getting dark and one of the twins had seen people sitting on the edge of where the lake was and they were  wearing dark cloths and the lake was getting dark and so were they.As soon as the last light of the sky went by  the lake looked like it was deep and secret.Rick had called out to theo and rachel to come inside because it was getting dark.