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Wednesday, June 6, 2018

Cheeky writing.

This is a piece of writing that I have done and it is a descriptive writing on a cheeky giraffe. Here it is....

CHEEKY!!!!!!!!



WALT: Write a descriptive piece of writing about this photo.
List a few questions you would ask about this picture before you
start writing. (Like……. Is this giraffe actually making a cheeky face.
List some exciting words you might use in your story.Be imaginative.


Questions:


  1. Is this giraffe smiling?
  2. What colour is this giraffe?
  3. Is this giraffe actually making a cheeky face?
  4. Does this giraffe have a big nose?


Exciting list of words:


  1. Wonderful
  2. Cheeky
  3. Tall
  4. Funny
  5. Happy


Poem:


Wonderful and brown spots
They have a head that is shaped like a dot.


Big deep eyes
They don’t eat flies


Just like honey
They look so funny


They can be tall
They can be small


They are so Cheeky
Sometimes they can be Freaky


In my photo they are happy
There not very good at being flappy


My animal is a Giraffe
Now this is my small graph.


Story:


Is my giraffe really smiling? Know it is not because in the photo,
you can look at is closer and you can notice that there is smile going
on right there. Now, Does this giraffe have a big nose?
Well, to me this giraffe has a small nose because I think that in
every giraffe photo that I have seen, has a very small nose.
What colour is this giraffe? The colour of this giraffe is giraffe
is dark brown dots and light brown skin.


My last question is this giraffe actually making a cheeky face?
I can’t really answer that because to me that is a cheeky and
I should know because I have 14 brothers and Sisters and they are
all cheeky.

The giraffe looks like it has legs on the top of it’s head.
The blue sky looks like blue has been splattered over a small canvas.
It’s spot’s look like big sized circles.

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