IS SPORTS MORE IMPORTANT THAN MUSIC?
I Have been asked ‘IS SPORTS MORE IMPORTANT THAN MUSIC’, well I say yes sports is more important than music.
Firstly, I think that sports is more than music, why? Because music is education and helps your health grow. Sports is something that goes world wide (e.g) (Rugby, Netball and much more.)
Secondly, I strongly think that sports is more important that music is because it keeps you fit and you can travel the world. Sports is important because people are bored and instead of staying in your house all day long from day to day, you could be outside enjoying yourself with your friends.
Thirdly, It is important that kids do exercise almost everyday so that they don’t get fat and lazy. All we need to do is have a compulsory P.E system at every primary school. This will help the kids become fit and healthy.I also think, “To enjoy the glow of good health, you must exercise”.My age should be doing lots of exercise so when they are older you will be fit and strong and you won’t have to watch your weight limit which you will have to do if you eat too much junk food and don’t do enough exercise.
Lastly, If you play music all your life, then it goes the same for you unless you do a lot of sport. Even King’s School recognizes the importance of sport over music. While the production was going on, they cancelled all music but still let all the sport go on. This is simply because sport is so much better to help kids stay healthy and it is the best way to exercise.
In summary, I think that sports is more important than music because it is educational, health, Friends/ activity and discipline.
Hey Charlee I like your piece of persuasive writing! I now think sport is WAAAAY More important than music!
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